Toni Bambara wrote a unique story with "Raymonds Run". She creates a happy story by using extensive details and an unpredictable end.
One of the things that she does to make the story unique is using extensive details. for example, an extensive detail is how much sueaky wanted to win the race "The big kids call me Mercury because im the swiftest thing in the neighborhood". in this quote she uses reference to the god Mercury, getting to be unique.
Another thing that the author makes is to use an unpredictable end. In the story the end is really strange. Squeaky changes all, her mind, her dream and she realized that she and Gretchen could be friends. " Actually Gretchen isnt so bad as I thought...". she is saying that gretchen could be good, but before in the story she hated Gretchen.
In conclusion I think that this story is really cool, the characters have some change of everything, that makes it interesting and unique. the details given in the story were another thing that caught my attention. I recomend everyone this book, because it is a story that talks about foollowing dreams and it is unique.
One of the things that she does to make the story unique is using extensive details. for example, an extensive detail is how much sueaky wanted to win the race "The big kids call me Mercury because im the swiftest thing in the neighborhood". in this quote she uses reference to the god Mercury, getting to be unique.
Another thing that the author makes is to use an unpredictable end. In the story the end is really strange. Squeaky changes all, her mind, her dream and she realized that she and Gretchen could be friends. " Actually Gretchen isnt so bad as I thought...". she is saying that gretchen could be good, but before in the story she hated Gretchen.
In conclusion I think that this story is really cool, the characters have some change of everything, that makes it interesting and unique. the details given in the story were another thing that caught my attention. I recomend everyone this book, because it is a story that talks about foollowing dreams and it is unique.